Question 7:
Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the
progress from it to the full product?
From the
construction of our preliminary video in comparison to our thriller film I feel
as though we have had a massive improvement between the two in terms of
editing, equipment knowledge and mise en scene usage. In doing so we have
learnt how to use the camera equipment to our full advantage and to use it to
the best we can to gain the fullest effect they have to offer as well as the
effects in the video software’s we used, having much more experience in using
the program on our second attempt in constructing and rending a video through
it. However not only did we learn about equipment and software through our
preliminary video but also decided to include some of the conventions found in
thriller films to give off the intense effect of a true thriller, causing the
audience to be engrossed with the film and on the edge of their seat through
out the screening. By exercising this in such an early stage of the production
we were able to get a head start on what would work best and what we could be
sure to include in order to make it as exiting and intensifying as we intended
it to be.
Firstly, the dark aspect of the preliminary video conformed to the thriller convention of dull lighting to keep am intense and sinister atmosphere which we decided worked very well by keeping the seriousness of the convention. It also gave off a sense of danger which we were sure to include in the film. By testing out this convention in a specific environment it enables us to know what type of rooms we could use to film in as well as what kind of darkness it should be at in order to carry this on in our film.
Despite not
having as much effect as we wanted we still tried to carry this on through the
film in ‘Soul’ however the place we filmed wasn't dark enough in order to give
the same scene of danger and seriousness that was represented in the
preliminary video. We wanted this effect in the Mac room where Demi and Her
assistant was to clearly indicate to the audience that this wasn't a safe place
to be, giving off an intense and unsettling feeling, representing the
antagonist. Despite this not turning out how we wanted we made sure to create
this unsettling intense atmosphere in other ways.
For example when we used close ups in
the preliminary video to put emphasis on what the characters where saying and
feeling, it also gave off a patronizing and threatening effect which caused the
power struggle between the two characters to swap and perhaps keep the audience
guessing on who has the upper hand here. We feel as though this effect worked
by having some sentences more appealing an understandable in a specific context
through the close up of the camera.In order to carry out this effect in ‘Soul’ we had lots of close ups while Demi was asking questions to make her appear on a higher status than Grace, while when the camera closes up on Grace she doesn’t say anything, indicating how afraid she is in this position; making the audience feel on edge towards what kind of power Demi really has over Grace.

We also tried to test out the convention of quick cuts in our preliminary in order to fully understand and play around with what time it was appropriate to use it in as well as what situation we could have it occur. Furthermore it was also to help us see what camera shots worked best in a series of quick 2 second clips which we then made sure to channel through to our film. By doing so and experimenting with this we figured out it was best to use a range of close ups and extreme close ups as well as one medium range shot in order to see what has happened before the quick cuts or what has happened afterwards. This was to create the quick panic and fear in the situation the quick cuts where unravelling towards, also keeping the pace of the video going and to make sure they do not loose interest. Also this was done to throw them off guard after the dialogue.
To carry this over into our thriller
opening we definitely strived to include this effect the quick cuts brought
forward onto the audience, expressing further elements of the story. By doing
so it made the flash back of Grace past appear more violent and relevant to the
audience by presenting it as so traumatizing and sudden that they are left in
shock to ponder on what has just unfolded in front of them. We also included the same camera shots from
the Preliminary as we felt as though these specific camera angles were relevant
and gave the full effect we were representing.
Further more
we didn't include any sound effect or music choice in our preliminary video
where I do believe it still had the same effect with out some however would
have created more of an intense atmosphere if some sort of sound track was
playing in the background. We decided to act upon this in our thriller film and
put two soundtracks in the film in order to have more depth into the situation
as well as the sudden change of mood and tone in specific scenes.
Also we decided to use tilting in the
preliminary as it gave off such a strong effect of power statue, having the
camera as well as the audience looking up to a specific character. This meant
that no matter what the audience would be placed at a lower status of the
character the camera is positioned and they would have no choice but to look up
to this character. However I do feel as though this effect was represented
stronger in our Preliminary video rather than in of thriller film.
One of the reasons why this may not have had more effect in
the film than it did in the preliminary video is because when the tilting is in
effect on Grace she is sitting down instead of standing up like Chloe is in the
video. This doesn't make her seem more as a threat and a higher status if she
is sitting down and perhaps would have worked better in a flash back or in the
scene where she escapes the interrogation room.
Further more we made sure to use a tripod for the camera more
often in the thriller opening than we did for the preliminary as in some scenes
the camera is incredibly shaky that you can clearly see that someone is merely
holding it to record. In order to create the sense of realism and
professionalism in the thriller film we made sure to use a tripod mostly for
every shot to have that balanced shot unless we need a handy cam in order to
create a shaky or uneasy effect for the scene. For example in the point of view
shot in Graces flash back we choose not to have a tripod
in order to make it seem more real as well as having the connection between the
characters feelings and the audience.
In conclusion there is no question that we have greatly
improved and learnt from many mistakes that we could have done without through
the process of making the preliminary in comparison the film opening. Many of
these factors could have been down to the thorough planning we had for the film
where with the preliminary we only had a story board to go by however the codes
and conventions we were still testing in the preliminary proved useful and in the
end decided to include in the final outcome. Over all from this process we have learnt that it comes down to good editing software, understanding of the
conventions and how to put them to good use through equipment such as camera angles and editing as well as detailed
planning to avoid plot holes and errors in the story. Also all of this can
heavily depend on audience research, by understanding your target audience as
well as who may watch your product you are then able to construct around their
needs and wants. This was something we were able to do in comparison to the
preliminary task which we could not gather audience feedback from.All these factors have been brought forward
and have proved useful in the construction of our thriller film.































